Battered by the blows of life
The stone falls out of the ring of many promises
Scratched and dulled, it isn’t the gem we thought
Just man-made, weak, and without much value
The ring, once radiant and beautiful, is empty
Prongs reach for what used to be
What of the promise it once held?
In the hands of the master jeweler, there is hope
Strengthened with new gold,
Intricately woven designs
Showcase the glittering diamond
Remade by fire, a new ring is forged
Purer, stronger, uniquely designed,
Declaring its promise to all
Battered by the blows of life
The marriage falls from its many promises
Scratched and dulled, it isn’t the journey we expected
If only man-directed, it remains weak and without much value
The marriage, once radiant and joyful, is painful
Hearts reach for what used to be
What of the promises they each held?
In the hands of the Master Designer, there is hope
Strengthened with new purpose,
Intricately woven plans
Showcase the glittering of endurance
Remade by fire, a greater marriage is forged
Purer, stronger, uniquely designed,
Declaring our promises restored in Him
With this ring, I thee wed
To have and to hold
Cherishing in joy or sorrow, want or plenty
Faithful to each other and to Him
Until death is allowed to part
Whom God has joined, let none separate
A poem for my wife on our 19th anniversary.
Beautiful and strong poem, Sean. It brought tears to my eyes. I believe it will touch a lot of people. Happy Anniversary!
Thank you for taking time to read. Your comments mean much since your poetry is so emotional and powerful.
A very moving tribute to your years together – this is really the way most of our marriages are!
Thanks, Susie. Having supportive in-laws who also model long term marriage is such a blessing.
What a beautiful picture of marriage in the hands of God. I couldn’t help but cry…..this certainly is Mark and I’s story of our marriage…..just beautiful, precious words, Sean. Again, Happy Anniversary!
I am so glad this resonated with you. Thanks for taking time to comment. We are glad to know you and your family.